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Thursday, September 8, 2016

Improving your writing

Short sentences are used for panic, danger, tension or to make something stand out.


She stopped, stunned.
Would he dare to jump?

Then he fell.

1 comment:

  1. Wow, Ocean, you have really shown how short sentences can be used for impact. It would be interesting to see you using short sentences as part of a longer piece of writing.
    Whaea Maria

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